As the deadline for COSMOS applications approaches, many students are grappling with how to approach the personal essay prompt. What is the admissions committee really looking for, and how can you present yourself in a genuine, impactful way?
Our team recently had the opportunity to sit in on a discussion led by Harpal Kochar and Anu, seasoned success coaches who shared their insights on mastering the COSMOS essays. Here are the top strategies they recommend:
Understand the Purpose
The COSMOS personal essay prompt asks you to share something about yourself that isn't already covered in your application. The key is to focus on highlighting a specific skill, talent, challenge or opportunity that provides deeper insight into who you are.
Admissions isn't looking for you to simply list accomplishments or flex your strengths. Rather, they want to understand your emotional maturity, ability to learn and grow from experiences, and potential to contribute to the COSMOS community.
Avoid Common Pitfalls
Many students make the mistake of getting lost in the broad prompt, unsure of what to focus on. Others simply reiterate their strengths without showing vulnerability. Harpal warns against coming across as a "prima donna" - admissions wants to see humility and self-awareness, not arrogance.
The most compelling essays will share a authentic, reflective story that reveals your values, perspectives and capacity for growth. Admissions wants to envision how you'll interact with your COSMOS cohort and add value to the learning environment.
Find Your Unique Angle
Your essay topic can come from a wide range of life experiences - a challenging journey, an impactful activity, a meaningful failure. The key is to choose a story that allows you to showcase who you are in a genuine, compelling way.
Anu advises students to know their audience, intention and themselves before starting to write. Focus on presenting a simple, honest narrative that gives the reader insight into your character. Avoid clichés and instead find a meaningful "why" behind your experiences.
Demonstrate Contribution
Beyond just sharing your personal story, the essay should convey how you'll contribute to the COSMOS community. Harpal emphasizes that admissions wants to see intellectual curiosity, not just a desire to attend the "best" program.
Discuss specific ways you plan to get involved, share your unique perspectives, and work collaboratively with your peers. Make a clear connection between your COSMOS experience and your broader academic and personal goals.
By approaching the essay with authenticity, self-awareness and a focus on contribution, you can craft a compelling narrative that sets you apart. Remember, admissions isn't looking for perfection - they want to understand who you are and how you'll thrive in the COSMOS environment.
Good luck with your applications! Let us know if you have any other questions.